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Valentine’s (Or Any Other Time’s) Writing Exercise

By Kate Gould

This begun as a Valentine’s competition, but it’s a useful writing exercise for any occasion.  The discipline of conveying detail in a few words is a good tool to use in all aspects of your writing and, if you’re struggling with a blank page, it can serve as both a distraction and a way to get some words down on paper, hopefully lifting the dreaded block.

Write on anything you like, but if love inspires you, in the 17 syllables of a haiku, tell us why your Valentine is so very special.  Or why you’re so right in being anti-Valentine.

In case you’re in need of a prompt, a haiku is a Japanese poem with three short lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

Matsuo Basho is said to have been a master of them.  Some of his (not always altogether intelligible) works are below.

the first cold shower

even the monkey seems to want

a little coat of straw

the wind of Mt. Fuji

I’ve brought on my fan!

a gift from Edo

old pond

a frog jumps

the sound of water

No epics of courtly love, no novels in verse, and no sonnets, please.  Vent or exalt, but do it in no more than 17 syllables then submit it in the box below.  We’ll publish our favourites in the next newsletter.


About the author:

Kate Gould has worked as an editor, book critic, columnist, slush pile reader, writing competition judge, hotel critic, magazine editor, English teacher, and research assistant. She is now Chief Editorial Consultant at The Fine Line. Her book on flashers, Exposing Phallacy, is to be published by Zero Books.


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5 Comments »

  1. valentine rose oh
    valentine heart just
    for a day we ne’er shall part

    Comment by Valerie Kaye — February 14, 2010 @ 3:39 pm

  2. Years to decades turn
    Music spins a fateful thread
    Weaving through our lives

    Comment by Sharon Cousins — February 15, 2010 @ 8:15 am

  3. She opened my heart
    But now says she must depart
    Close the door my love

    Comment by Jaf — February 15, 2010 @ 11:05 am

  4. Warm hairy cuddles
    Sparkly eyes, whisky giggles
    Your nose against mine

    Comment by Isla — February 15, 2010 @ 12:57 pm

  5. Voices Are Lying
    Every Nuance Tempered
    Into Night-time Ears

    (Spells Valentine if it isn’t obvious!)

    Comment by Elaine Grainger — February 24, 2010 @ 7:16 pm

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